First Contact
Before (Amateur)"hey!! im looking for work and saw ur company needs a website. i can do it cheap and fast! let me know asap"
After (Pro)"Hello [Name], I noticed your business is looking for a new website. I'm a developer with experience in [Niche], and I'd love to discuss how I can help. Would you be open to a quick call?"
Discussing Payment
Before (Amateur)"so like when r u gonna pay me? lol i really need the money"
After (Pro)"Just following up on the invoice sent on [Date]. According to our agreement, payment is due tomorrow. Please let me know if you need any other details to process it."